Thanks to advice from Donald, I've attempted to make the design less busy by removing the confusing looking pikes on the island, and instead adding sharks to show it's a hard place to reach. I've also made the "greetings from" text a lot larger, and added a strapline to provide more context.
I've made changes to this design as well, which is long overdue as it has remained pretty stagnant as a concept. I toned down the woven looking texture in the background, and made it smaller so it's not so obvious. Similarly to the postcard concept above, I've also added a strapline and some more text down the bottom just to make the issue a bit more clear.
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